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WaterMy dying friend holds his hand under the arc of water pouring from the hose. He waits for a silver salmon to jumpfrom the clear stream, gulp his cancerlike a Yellow Sally, dive into tomorrow.When...

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Very touching, with an interesting visual.

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yes, esp. what the the rainbow adds, in that arcing-water aura

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Very touching...loved the line, 'dive into tomorrow', while the last line leaves a poignant mark.

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Kendall, This is hard ground to work. Very hard ground. I've been trying to find my way towards similar territory, but haven't really found a way in. I'm not sure it's done, but there's a lot to like...

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Well done. "...his hope recedes / up in liquid." as in "up in smoke." And water is supposed to heal, but in this case, no. The juxtapositions are powerful and you pull it off. Love the last line.

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My dying friend holds his hand under the arc of water pouring from the hose. He waits for a silver salmon to jump from the clear stream, gulp his cancer like a Yellow Sally, dive into tomorrow. When...

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Wow, Kendall! Just wow! You have been writing some amazing poems this month. Loved this one.

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I've also been trying to tread this territory and think you've done it!"He waits for a silver salmon to jumpfrom the clear stream, gulp his cancerlike a Yellow Sally, dive into tomorrow."

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